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Stevenukd Posted 19 years ago
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MEDICAL UNIVERSITY

0Dear Teachers,02br
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00- Is the CV below natural? Thanks in advance to Teachers! Stevenukd.02br
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00- I'm the senior of pharceuticals deparment of Medical university. I write this form to send to your dear company with the hope of finding a stable job after I graduate . With the skills that I have been trained and the experiences I have, I hope your dear company give me a chance to perfect myself more when I become a member of your company. It's up to your dear company to arrange a job which is suitable with my ability. I promise that I will finish well the given work and to be a part of the company's development. 02br
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00- I hope your dear company will give me a chance to uphold my ability.02br
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00Thanks very much.0-
  

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0Awful, Steve-- wherever did you pick up all those endearments?! 02i 00]. I write 01b 00in 02b 00the hope of finding01b 00 02b 00a 01b 00suitable02b 00 job 01b 00after graduation02b 00 .

  • 0Awful, Steve-- wherever did you pick up all those endearments?!
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  • I write 01b 00in 02b 00the hope of finding01b 00 02b 00a 01b 00suitable02b 00 job 01b 00after graduation02b 00 .
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0Awful, Steve-- wherever did you pick up all those endearments?! Omit them and try this:02br
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01b00I am a02b00 senior 01b00in the Pharmaceutical Department 02b00of Medical 01b00University02b00 [01i00Is that the real name of the university?02i00]. I write 01b00in 02b

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