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Antonija Posted 20 years ago
Vocabulary
means of transport
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Pipeline system is the cheapest and the simplest means of transport and it is used for oil transport from oil field to the big sea ports, from where the oil is transported by ships (tankers) to individual reffineries or to the big oil terminals (oil port), from where it is transported by pipelines to the reffineries to the inland.
Pipeline system is the cheapest and the simplest means of transport and it is used for oil transport from oil field to the big sea ports, from where the oil is transported by ships (tankers) to individual reffineries or to the big oil terminals (oil port), from where it is transported by pipelines to the reffineries to the inland.
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Hello, Antonia! I think you should make 2 or 3 short sentences instead of such a long one That way, maybe you can get rid of 1 or 2 "from"s...
- Hello, Antonia!
- I think you should make 2 or 3 short sentences instead of such a long one That way, maybe you can get rid of 1 or 2 "from"s...
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Hello, Antonia!
I think you should make 2 or 3 short sentences instead of such a long one
That way, maybe you can get rid
I think you should make 2 or 3 short sentences instead of such a long one
That way, maybe you can get rid 
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I agree it needs to be broken down into smaller sentences.
Maybe something along these lines...
Pipeline systems are the simplest and cheapest means of transporting oil from the oil fields to the sea ports. From the ports it is pumped onto tankers which transport it to big oil terminals and individual refineries from where it is piped and distributed to depots and individual cus
Maybe something along these lines...
Pipeline systems are the simplest and cheapest means of transporting oil from the oil fields to the sea ports. From the ports it is pumped onto tankers which transport it to big oil terminals and individual refineries from where it is piped and distributed to depots and individual cus
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