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Tnas Posted 14 years ago
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Me, My money, and My devices (abstract)
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I must to prepare a resume about a news to my English class. So, I'd like to post my paragraphs as I write them. Could anyone help me correcting them? Thanks in advance.
I've just written the abstract:
I must to prepare a resume about a news to my English class. So, I'd like to post my paragraphs as I write them. Could anyone help me correcting them? Thanks in advance.
I've just written the abstract:
The way to control the money and deal with it is changing. Nowadays, the Internet represents a new world where the money transactions have gotten a new concept. The devices revolution is giving to people others possibilities to manipulate the money themselves.
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The way to control money and deal with it is changing. Nowadays the internet represents a new world for money handling, where money transactions are done according to new concepts. Most recently the handheld devices revolution is giving people new possibilities for manipulating money right in the palm of their hand.
- The way to control money and deal with it is changing.
- Nowadays the internet represents a new world for money handling, where money transactions are done according to new concepts.
- Most recently the handheld devices revolution is giving people new possibilities for manipulating money right in the palm of their hand.
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The way to control money and deal with it is changing. Nowadays the internet represents a new world for money handling, where money transactions are done according to new concepts. Most recently the handheld devices revolution is giving people new possibilities for manipulating money right in the palm of their hand.
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