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Nikitus Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

Maybe I loved someone not worth loving

Hello.

Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

"Maybe I loved someone not worth loving. Besides that person made fun of me several times because her vanity was bigger than her decency."

Thanks.
  

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A comma is needed after "Besides". It is all grammatically correct, but "several times" seems somehow weak. I also wonder whether "Besides" is quite the right way to connect these ideas.

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  • A comma is needed after "Besides".
  • It is all grammatically correct, but "several times" seems somehow weak.
  • I also wonder whether "Besides" is quite the right way to connect these ideas.
  • And is vanity a likely reason for making fun of someone?
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A comma is needed after "Besides".

It is all grammatically correct, but "several times" seems somehow weak. I also wonder whether "Besides" is quite the right way to connect these ideas. And is vanity a likely reason for making fun of someone?
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