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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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May someone please read my essay? I'm struggling
)The format is suppose to be in MLA In my paper I have a few lyrics inputted in the essay but I dont think it is in the right format.
WHAT I NEED HELP ON or cristism
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* my thesis and intro
* need more sources
* everything needs to be in past tense
* I added little notes where i need help (:
Also please let me know if my essay is strong and my thesis supports my body paragraph.
I attached my essay.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0Bx2Kkp4f4ou1cGhjU0ZmQmttNDg/view?usp=sharing
WHAT I NEED HELP ON or cristism
-----------------
* my thesis and intro
* need more sources
* everything needs to be in past tense
* I added little notes where i need help (:
Also please let me know if my essay is strong and my thesis supports my body paragraph.
I attached my essay.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0Bx2Kkp4f4ou1cGhjU0ZmQmttNDg/view?usp=sharing
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This appears to be a homework assignment. I'm afraid we can't help. Your teacher wants to see what you can do, not what we can do.
- This appears to be a homework assignment.
- I'm afraid we can't help.
- Your teacher wants to see what you can do, not what we can do.
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This appears to be a homework assignment. I'm afraid we can't help. Your teacher wants to see what you can do, not what we can do.
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