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BeginStudent Posted 18 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

May someone check my paragraph please.

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00I write a paragraph to my english teacher and i will need to give it to her tomorrow .02br
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00This paragraph bout responsibility:02br
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00A responsible person is someone who makes good decisions about things, someone who can be trusted to do things that they are supposed to.02br
00Do you think it is good for someone to be like that? 02br
00I think it is good to be like that because the 00responsible person00 always do what necessary on time , it is good 00habit00.02br
00Do you think you are like that?02br
00I think that I'm responsible person and I will prove to my English teacher in future.02br
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00Summary , I 00learnt a lesson00 00 00in English project and I promise I will be more responsible in next time.02br
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12br 10Do you think it is good for someone to be like that? 12br 12br 10From ,12br 12br 10Moshe-Bittan12br 12blockquote 10Seems a good idea to me! 0-

  • 12br 10Do you think it is good for someone to be like that?
  • 12br 12br 10From ,12br 12br 10Moshe-Bittan12br 12blockquote 10Seems a good idea to me!
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01cite10BeginStudent12cite10Hi,12br
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10I 11b10wrote12b10 a paragraph 11b10for12b10 my 11b10E12b10nglish teacher and 11b10I12b10 will need to give it to her tomorrow .12br
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10This paragraph11b
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0 Thanks , you recommended to me add something else or stay with it ? 02br
00Someothers people could check it ? 0-
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0Hi,02br
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00The words you are asking other people to check here include sentences I gave you in your other thread.02br
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00In my opinion, you need to write this now in the best way you can and then give it to your teacher. He/she asked you to write the letter. He/she didn't ask you to ask other people to write it for you.02br
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0 I don't ask people to do my job , I want advices and if someone check me that ...02br
00I want to give my teacher without mistakes. 0-
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I think that it's perfect[<:o)]

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Emotion: big smile Thanks dude my exam is today and this gave me an idea about the subject...so thanks

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