May someone check my motivation letter?

0Dear Sir o Madam,02br
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00 With this letter, I would like to express my interest in studying at the University of **** as an Erasmus student.02br
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00First of all, I would like to give you some background information about me.02br
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00I was raised in a small town, called ** ******, situated in the South of *********. Although I have a secondary school near from my town I have decided to study far from my home from an early age. Now I am living in ********* for seven years and I think that is a great opportunity to go abroad to finish my degree.02br
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00I am currently studying Physics at the University of *********. I have decided to apply for the Socrates-Erasmus program because I am sure it is a great opportunity to develop my academic skills and to meet whole lot of new and interesting people and different cultures. Moreover I consider this programme would help me in improve my English, specially fluency and speaking. Last but not least, I am very curious to get in touch with Swedish culture and educational system.02br
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00 At academic level a very obvious reason why the **** University is an attactive university is its internationality and the multicultural atmosphere and the attractive of the city. The subjects that gives me the Faculty of Engineering *** aren’t offered at my home university. I would take courses focusing in fields of New Technologies, Neuroscience, Biomedical or Environmental because I am considering the future option to make master studies relationed with the research in these fields. 02br
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00 I would very much like to spend one semester at the University of ****, and I am eager to gain new experiences. Furthermore I could improve my English and learn some basic Swedish.02br
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00 Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to your positive response.02br
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00Yours faithfully,02br
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