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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

May I have comment on grammar,please?

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Hi, There are several errors, and parts that are awkward.. My advice is to try to rewrite it as simply as you can, and to use more than one sentence. Clive

— Clive

  • Hi, There are several errors, and parts that are awkward..
  • My advice is to try to rewrite it as simply as you can, and to use more than one sentence.
  • Clive
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Hi,

There are several errors, and parts that are awkward.. My advice is to try to rewrite it as simply as you can, and to use more than one sentence.

Clive
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