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Sali Sadegh Posted 12 years ago
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Sometimes people are wilder than the wildest animals. Today’s morning I saw a film of producer of clothes from fox fur in China. The scenes were very horrible. Skinning the animals while it was alive or its strangling for this reason that does not harm the skin, all of them are signs of savagery. If the manufacturer of such products does not have a market for their products then a lot of the violence will be decreased. Let's to don't use of these products.
  

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This morning I saw a film on producing clothes from fox fur in China. The scenes were very horrible. Skinning the animal while it was alive or strangling it so as not to damage the skin—these are signs of savagery.

— Mister Micawber

  • This morning I saw a film on producing clothes from fox fur in China.
  • The scenes were very horrible.
  • Skinning the animal while it was alive or strangling it so as not to damage the skin—these are signs of savagery.
  • If the manufacturer of such products does not have a market for its products, then the cruelty will decrease.
  • Let's not use these products.
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Sometimes people are wilder than the wildest animals.This morning I saw a film on producing clothes from fox fur in China. The scenes were very horrible. Skinning the animal while it was alive or strangling it so as not to damage the skin—these are signs of savagery. If the manufacturer of such products does not have a market for its products, then the cruelty will decrease. Let's not use these
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