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Sali Sadegh Posted 12 years ago
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may I ask to edit the following sentence?

This research project will eliminate the need for performing biopsy for the purpose of classification of tumor and also separating it from rest of the organ, extract image features from the separated tumor and classify the tumor by using of segmentation on MRI images.
  

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You are trying to say too much in one sentence. Use more than one. eg This research project will eliminate the need to perform a biopsy to classify the tumor.

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  • You are trying to say too much in one sentence.
  • Use more than one.
  • eg This research project will eliminate the need to perform a biopsy to classify the tumor.
  • I'm not sure what else you want to say .
  • Reword and repost, if you wish.
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You are trying to say too much in one sentence. Use more than one.

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This research project will eliminate the need to perform a biopsy to classify the tumor.
I'm not sure what else you want to say. Reword and repost, if you wish.
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what about this?

This research project will eliminate the need to perform a biopsy to classify the tumor by using of segmentation on MRI images.

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This research project will eliminate the need to perform a biopsy to classify the tumor

by using segmentation on MRI images.

This sounds like by using segmentation on MRI images modifies 'to classify'. I think you intend it to modify 'eliminate'.
If so, say

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