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Sali Sadegh Posted 12 years ago
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may I ask to edit my text?

Thank you for letting me know In this regard. I saw the Website of Nex Corporation. It seems it is a Korean corporation active in Battery and Battery management system to produce both Hardware (Battery and related digital circuses) and Software (for management the use of Batteries). I think the atmosphere of Iraq isn't a lucrative market for this suggestion because of retardation in digital productions. Most of the consumer market for this type of equipment are in the digital embedded systems production, but most of this embedded systems import directly from abroad. we have serious difficulty in assembling components designed overseas and I think we have a large gap between design and manufacturing, at least in the next several years. So I think it is a marketing email combined with an exaggeration to encourage for cooperating.
  

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This is my attempt to decipher what I think you meant to say in your correspondence. I had been doing electronic related work for over 20 years. For what it is worth, I made some corrrections in the first half of your reply so that it sounds more technically natural.

— Grammarfreak

  • This is my attempt to decipher what I think you meant to say in your correspondence.
  • I had been doing electronic related work for over 20 years.
  • For what it is worth, I made some corrrections in the first half of your reply so that it sounds more technically natural.
  • I have some questions about the underlined and the construction of the last line, especially " to encourage for cooperating".
  • Thank you for your reply.
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This is my attempt to decipher what I think you meant to say in your correspondence. I had been doing electronic related work for over 20 years. For what it is worth, I made some corrrections in the first half of your reply so that it sounds more technically natural. I have some questions about the underlined and the construction of the last
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Thank you for letting me know (full stop!) In this regard. I saw the Website (no capital) of Nex Corporation. It seems it (it = the website?) is a Korean corporation active in Battery and Battery management system (plural) to produce both Hardware (no capital) (Battery (no capital) and related digital circuses (I think you mean circuits) ) and
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AlpheccaStarsMost of the consumer market for this type of equipment are (subject-verb agreement) in the digital embedded systems production,
When I read this line, I had a little trouble with " most of the consumer market..." because in my opinion, it makes better semantic sense to say " most of the consumers
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