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Advances in Computer over the recent years have brought about revolution in science, medicine, psychology, education, business, and entertainment. I wish to be part of the future revolution by become a researcher in the academic environment as a professor and conducting research groups, that is why I want to research on Computer Science. My research goal is solving human problems around the world not only in a country or just in the specific borders. I believe that a scientist should serve all kinds of human because he belongs to all mankind. National borders and countries should be meaningless to him. Why? Because science knows no country and boundaries and all human society have contributed to the advancement of it.
To achieve this goal I need two things: First, get a doctoral degree. Second, having a strong background in research. The second case is also one of the first case requirements. To do good and applied research and applications we need to have the ability in this regard. To do good and applied research we need to have the enough ability in this regard. On the other hand PhD course and also postdoc unlike other courses is quite research. To do good and applied research and applications we need to have the ability in this regard. On the other hand PhD course and also postdoc unlike other previous courses is quite research. I think taking a master by research course beside my previous taught master course will be equipped me to enhance the abilities on the research in order to achieve my main goal.
Programming, Mathematics and Physics have been my strongest subject for as long as I can remember. I have always found the subject interesting as it demands pure logic. For most of life issues I have modular an algorithmic thinking. My natural ability for logical thinking and problem solving has been strengthened through the study of this subject and the constant challenge of applying new methods and concepts.
I was fascinated with computer and its application in 2000 as a student of Science & Culture University in the field of Computer Engineering. Later on I decided to pursue a career in this field. My decision was supported by my skills at programming, analysis and simulation systems. It was a sense of achievement that further reinforced my ambition to pursue software engineering as a career.
My Engineering degree has given a strong foundation to my analytical skills since civil designing involves a lot of long, complex and intricate calculations and the application of basic system skills. Between 2004 and 2011, I have been working full-time with the Interior Ministry. In this Organization I have been working as a production line simulator for the national identity card, project manager of analysis and design system project. Also a project manager in an e-learning project, Moreover, I am serving as a consultant on information technology and communication to the Head of the LEO Organization.
Then I started the taught master in Advanced Computing - Machine Learning, Data Mining and High Performance, at the University of Bradford. During this period I got the in-depth knowledge of different AI topics, such as neural network, statistical pattern recognition, Mobile and Ubiquitous Computing, Computational Neuroscience, Image Processing and Computer Vision, Learning in Autonomous Systems, etc. I did several research projects, the most significant of which was my master's thesis in the areas of machine learning classification. I developed a new method for classification decision boundaries which has improved the accuracy of decision boundaries for many of well-known datasets on UCI (Center for Machine Learning and Intelligent Systems). In addition to what I have studied in school and college, the above-mentioned experiences have also shaped the personality that I represent today.

Currently I am working with two research groups and I’m teaching at a high rank university. I can mention working with ‘LP (Language Processing) Research Group’ at P R S A Corporation (company knowledge base) on the ‘Arabic Question Answering’ project and computational geometry research group at University of Essex and teaching and organizing a lecture entitled “Computer Applications in Economic Systems” for BSc Students at Brighton University (Excellent ranking among universities), Department of Mathematics and Computer.
According to a sustainable approach to all my tasks, I always effort for the best outcomes and never turn away from a decent challenge. I believe that my endless curiosity, infectious self-motivation, and ability to work effectively as part of team would make me an ideal candidate for master research in Computer Science.