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Jobb Posted 21 years ago
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Mathematics professors say so

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Cui Shenggu, vice president of Anyang City Mathematics Association (AMA), told reporter that AMA has held several proseminars for his demonstration, thinking that Hou has pushed GC in a great step. But they could not be sure that his demo is absolutely correct. Yang Qiantai, associate professor of the Mathematics Department of Anyang Teachers College, said that on the grounds of his current knowledge, he has not found out any mistake in Hou's research achievement. Jia Zhou, professor of the Mathematics Department of Henan Normal University, told reporter that he has once spent a long while to read up Hou's research result and found no error in it. Because of Hou is an amateur of mathematics, however, he used many non-professional-mathematics-languages in his essay. Perhaps because of this, many mathematics experts would not like to read it. Prof.Jia said that Hou needs to modify his essay with professional mathematic language, if he wants his research result to truly get recognition from people.
  

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'Cui Shenggu, Vice President of Anyang City Mathematics Association (AMA), told the reporter that the AMA has held several proseminars on his demonstration, thinking that Hou had taken the GC forward a great step. However, they could not be sure that his proof is absolutely correct. Yang Qiantai, Associate Professor of the Mathematics Department of Anyang Teachers College, said that on the grounds of his current knowledge, he has not found any mistake in Hou's research achievement.

  • 'Cui Shenggu, Vice President of Anyang City Mathematics Association (AMA), told the reporter that the AMA has held several proseminars on his demonstration, thinking that Hou had taken the GC forward a great step.
  • However, they could not be sure that his proof is absolutely correct.
  • Yang Qiantai, Associate Professor of the Mathematics Department of Anyang Teachers College, said that on the grounds of his current knowledge, he has not found any mistake in Hou's research achievement.
  • Jia Zhou, Professor of the Mathematics Department of Henan Normal University, told the reporter that he has spent considerable time reviewing Hou's research and found no error in it.
  • Because Hou is an amateur in mathematics, however, he uses many nonprofessional mathematical terms in his essay.
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'Cui Shenggu, Vice President of Anyang City Mathematics Association (AMA), told the reporter that the AMA has held several proseminars on his demonstration, thinking that Hou had taken the GC forward a great step. However, they could not be sure that his proof is absolutely correct. Yang Qiantai, Associate Professor of the Mathematics Department of Anyang Teachers College, said that on the ground
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Thank you MM.

1) "The reporter" obviously refers to third person, while the writer of the article reported in
first person, so I wonder whether i can just use "reporter"?

2) I am not absolutely sure the usage "essay" is wrong, but it seems that "treatise" is better.
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Hi Jobb,

I meant to ask you about those items.

(1) I had trouble with this because, in my experience, such public announcements are given to reporters assembled for the purpose-- a person or his agent calls the newspapers and arranges a press conference, small or large. Therefore, the newspaper articles will invariably read, 'Mr. Zed told reporters on Tuesday...'

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