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Sun 94 Posted 16 years ago
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Math earning...

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( personnal statement for college admission)

My advanced math skills which have been proved through earnng an award in National Math Contest demostrats I am a good candidate for Accounting and Finance.
  

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My advanced math skills, demonstrated by an award in a national math contest, are good qualifications for a candidate for Accounting and Finance. It would be better to specify the precise name of the award and contest.

  • My advanced math skills, demonstrated by an award in a national math contest, are good qualifications for a candidate for Accounting and Finance.
  • It would be better to specify the precise name of the award and contest.
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My advanced math skills, demonstrated by an award in a national math contest, are good qualifications for a candidate for Accounting and Finance.

It would be better to specify the precise name of the award and contest.

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