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BAYRAM ERDEM Posted 12 years ago
Vocabulary

martyrise

Hello!

Could you please help me to rewrite the sentence below in a correct and natural English?

''Whilst in shower I counted that I lost around 34 hair and it feels like the same as a commander witnesses his men to be martyrised.''
  

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Hi. First of all, I don't know how someone count the number of hairs he/she has lost. Whilst in shower I counted that I lost around 34 hairs and it feels like the same as a commander witnesses watches his men to be martyred.

  • Hi.
  • First of all, I don't know how someone count the number of hairs he/she has lost.
  • Whilst in shower I counted that I lost around 34 hairs and it feels like the same as a commander witnesses watches his men to be martyred.
  • '' I would use the word "murdered" instead of "martyred".
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Hi.
First of all, I don't know how someone count the number of hairs he/she has lost.
Whilst in shower I counted that I lost around 34 hairs and it feels like the same as a commander witnesses watches his men to be martyred.''
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