Marketing letter

Hi, I'm trying to craft an real estate marketing email that captivates the audience and give them a sense of credibiltiy. However, i feel it is lack of vigor.. Any comments are welcomed.

Subject: I could help you move across town or around the world



Dear Clients,

First and foremost, let me say Happy New Year to all and may 2010 bring you much success, happiness and prosperity. My reason for writing this email is to acquaint you with my services as a Ken real estate agent, and possibly to help you save a lot of money and anxiety from the property dilemmas.

Ken agents are the most knowledgeable agents, with the experience and community connections to assist you in the corporate lease, rental and home purchase processes. We are imbibed with the skills and experience to get the job done in today’s market. Furthermore, the proof of quality service has generated a large percentage of businesses from past customers and referrals.

The benefits of allowing me to handle your property are many. However, the most important is that I am a full time professional, and have the tools and knowledge to assist you with your needs, thereby relieving you of a potentially stressful situation.

Specifically, I can help find buyers, secure tenants for your vacant properties and/or manage your rental properties for you! We are even providing long term renewal service, with no commission.

In closing, please call me at 123456789 when I can be of service to you, and I look forward to working with you as a preferred client.



Sincerely,
Clive