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Anonymous Posted 8 years ago
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Marketing

Hi everyone, I'm new here. So what do you think about my word choice in this sentence?

"Internet development has dramatically changed the face of marketing in general and advertising in particular."

I think there's something weird about it but I don't know how to fix it.

Thank you all

  

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anonymous what do you think about my word choice in this sentence? "I think there's something weird about it but I don't know how to fix it. I think it is OK.

— Mister Micawber

  • anonymous what do you think about my word choice in this sentence?
  • "I think there's something weird about it but I don't know how to fix it.
  • I think it is OK.
  • What part worries you?
  • If anything, I would simplify it this way: The Internet has dramatically changed the face of marketing in general and advertising in particular.
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anonymouswhat do you think about my word choice in this sentence? "Internet development has dramatically changed the face of marketing in general and advertising in particular."I think there's something weird about it but I don't know how to fix it.

I think it is OK. What part worries you? If anything, I would simplify it this way:

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