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User_gary Posted 19 years ago
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When our school dawns, we will be able to go her house daily as her house is very near to our school.

Once january dawns, we will be able to use these flowers, as by that time it will have blossomed.

Her progress is marked by these three awards. I hope she soon will be a master in this field.

Please correct my sentences.
  

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User_gary When our school dawns, we will be able to go her house daily as her house is very near to our school. You must learn to avoid repetition. " Once J anuary dawns, we will be able to use these flowers, as by that time it will have blossomed.

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  • User_gary When our school dawns, we will be able to go her house daily as her house is very near to our school.
  • You must learn to avoid repetition.
  • " Once J anuary dawns, we will be able to use these flowers, as by that time it will have blossomed.
  • The pronoun is singular - what does it refer to?
  • Her progress is marked by these three awards.
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User_garyWhen our school dawns, we will be able to go her house daily as her house is very near to our school. You must learn to avoid repetition. "...as it is very near..."


Once January dawns, we will be able to use these flowers, as by that time it
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Hi Gary,

What does 'When our school dawns' mean? It sounds very odd. 'Dawn' is not just a simple alternative for the verb 'start', if that is what you are trying to say.

Clive
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CliveWhat does 'When our school dawns' mean? It sounds very odd. 'Dawn' is not just a simple alternative for the verb 'start', if that is what you are trying to say.
I have applied this meaning from the dictionary :

dawn ------ If a day or period of time dawns, it begins:

e.g.
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Hi,

'Dawn' as a verb means 'slowly begins, slowly appears'. It's OK when you are talking about a year or a day, for example, but not when you are talking about something like school, which simply starts/begins.

Clive
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