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Abil Posted 18 years ago
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marked a sharp rise

The prices of essential commodities marked a sharp rise in July. Edible oil sold at rupees 160, a 10% increase from the previous month. The price of lentils increased by 12% to rupees 64.

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Hi, The prices of essential commodities marked a sharp rise in July. Edible oil sold at rupees 160, a 10% increase from the previous month. The price of lentils increased by 12% to rupees 64.

— Clive

  • Hi, The prices of essential commodities marked a sharp rise in July.
  • Edible oil sold at rupees 160, a 10% increase from the previous month.
  • The price of lentils increased by 12% to rupees 64.
  • The prices of essential commodities were marked by a sharp rise in July.
  • Edible oil sold at 160 rupees per litre, a 10% increase from the previous month.
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Hi,
The prices of essential commodities marked a sharp rise in July. Edible oil sold at rupees 160, a 10% increase from the previous month. The price of lentils increased by 12% to rupees 64.
The prices of essential commodities were marked by a sharp rise in July. Edible oil sold at 160 rupees per litre, a 10% increase from the previous month. The price of lentils increased by 12% to 64 r
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Thanks Clive. What alternative do you suggest?
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Hi,
Does 'cooking oil' reflect your meaning?
Clived
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Yes. That's the word I was looking for. Thanks.
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