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The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

my essay:

The given diagram illustrates how instant noodles, which are noodles that can be eaten instantly when pouring hot water in, are produced in a factory.

Overall, it can be seen that there are mainly 5 steps: silos storing, cooking and drying, vegetables and spices, labeling and sealing.

The first stage is that a truck will bring flour inside the factory, then silos are stored in it, then they use water and oil will be added into a mixer where all materials are mixed together. Then, some rollers are used to continue the process by rolling and using dough strips to move the noodles into the next part of the process. After that, noodles become in a circle shape and cooking oil will be added to cook noodles as well as drying up the noodles.

In the next stage, small cups are produced where all vegetables and spices can be added into cups for customers. Finally, cups are then labeled and sealed, then noodles are ready to be exported to shops and customers.