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Antonija Posted 20 years ago
Vocabulary

maritime accidents

Can you please check the following sentences? Thank you.



Risks in the transport of oil and derivatives/oil and derivatives transport

Traffic/Car and maritime accidents with oil and derivative spills/spills of oil and derivatives are the source/cause of pollution of the environment and toxic influence/effect on the environment, as well as cause of fires and explosions with possible injuries of the(?) people.
  

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Risks in oil and derivatives transport Vehicle and maritime accidents with oil and derivative spills are the source of environmental pollution and other toxic effects, and are the cause of fires and explosions with the risk of injury.

— Mister Micawber

  • Risks in oil and derivatives transport Vehicle and maritime accidents with oil and derivative spills are the source of environmental pollution and other toxic effects, and are the cause of fires and explosions with the risk of injury.
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Risks in oil and derivatives transport
Vehicle and maritime accidents with oil and derivative spills are the source of environmental pollution and other toxic effects, and are the cause of fires and explosions with the risk of injury.
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I suggest that the ending should recognise the idea expressed in 'of the people' since all the other extracts have considered risks to plant operators and other workers directly involved in the factories.

This can be expressed by 'with the risk of injury to the general public'.
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Thank you Mister Micawber and Alan.
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