Maps_ A City Hospital's accesses between 2007 and 2010

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The maps show the changes of the road access to a hospital between 2007 and 2010.
Describe the main features of the maps.

The maps illustrate how road accesses to a city hospital considerably changed over a three-year period from 2007 to 2010.

Generally, it is clear that this area witnessed remarkable developments. Most noticeably, new facilities were added while trees disappeared in front of the hospital.

For more details, it should be noted that there was a bus stop located East of the hospital. From City Road, there used to be two rows of trees in Hospital Road, with a car park for the public and staff was in the right.

Furthermore, it is noteworthy that some striking changes happened in 2010. The city hospital and three roads named City Road, Hospital Road and Ring Road remained unchanged. Next to the right side of the hospital, the old bus stop was replaced by a new wider car park for the public. After three years from 2007, the location of the tree rows turned into a bigger bus station on the left side and a staff car park on the right one. There were two roundabouts in Hospital Road, one of which was nearby City Road and the left was sited in front of Ring Road. From each roundabout, a road was built to access the bus station.

Loan Tran · Accepted Answer

AlpheccaStars · Answer

The (how many maps are there?) maps illustrate how road accesses to a city hospital ~~considerably~~ were changed over a three-year period from 2007 to 2010.

Generally, ~~it is clear that~~ (These dummy-it clauses are not informative. Avoid them.) this area ~~witnessed~~ remarkable developments. (Vague. Be more specific about the major differences) Most noticeably, new facilities (not a good word. A facility is the hospital itself.) were added while trees disappeared (Trees do not magically disappear There are no trees on the first map. Those little icons are bus stops. Read the diagrams very closely..) in front of the hospital.

For more details, ~~it should be noted that~~ (These dummy-it clauses are not informative. Avoid them.) there was a bus stop located East (East is not a proper noun. No capital.) of the hospital. From City Road, there used to be two rows of trees in (incorrect. ) Hospital Road, with a car park for the public and staff was (Ungrammatical. "With" is a preposition. You cannot use a main clause as the object of a preposition.) in the right.

Furthermore, ~~it is noteworthy that~~ (These dummy-it clauses are not informative. Avoid them.) some striking changes happened in 2010. (Incorrect. How do you know that the changes were not in 2008 or 2009?) The city hospital and three roads named City Road, Hospital Road and Ring Road remained unchanged. (That is not coherent. "Remaining the same" is not a "striking change.") Next to the right side (Use compass directions for maps - east, west, north, south, not page directions - up, down, left, right.) of the hospital, the old bus stop was replaced (incorrect. The legend is not part of the map.) by a new ~~wider~~ larger car park for the public. After three years from 2007, the location of the tree rows (How can a tree become a bus station? This topic is math and science, not magic.) turned into a bigger bus station on the left side and a staff car park on the right one. There were two roundabouts in Hospital Road, one of which was (A roundabout is not a named road. They are different things.) nearby City Road and the left was sited in front of Ring Road. From each roundabout, a road was built to access the bus station.

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Maps_ A City Hospital's accesses between 2007 and 2010

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