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Many young people choose to take a year out between finishing school and starting university in order to gain work experience or to travel. The experience of non-academic life this offers benefits the individual when they return to education. To...

Nowadays, young people often spend one year between finishing school and starting university to experience or to travel. In my opinion, this is a good idea but it also has a face, too. On the firsthand, experience and travel will give people opportunities when they go back to school. When people experience, they will collide. They have to think about how to solve the problems and they will have more acquirement. My cousin decided to take one year to travel and gain work, now he is doing his job very well. It is very important when people have more experience. Despite this, it will take people 1 year or more to experience and during that time, they can do a lot of things.1 year has a large number of days. If people don't travel, they are learning at university. They can graduate sooner and get a job. Some people go on experiencing, they’ll get drugs and their lives become bad. We could travel but just 6 months or 8 months, it will be better. Experience and travel give people a lot of acquirement in the study, work. But sometimes, it makes people disobey discipline, becoming addicted and it not only brings bad but also affects family and people's life.

  

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