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Guille Escalona Posted 6 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Many students believe Internet must be a free service during the Coronavirus pandemic because the department of education must guarantee the access to the school services if they continue to function. Do you agree or disagree?

When we talk about the access to education during this pandemic crisis, is a labor of the universities to ensure the access to the education to their students, after all it was their decision to have a modality online during this year a lot of students are paying their careers, so the university has the obligation provide the access which the students are paying, also is important to bring into the discussion the limited access to internet that some students have in our country, if they have already a problem to have access to their classes and they are paying for those classes, is mandatory for the universities to secure the access to their students to their respective classes, the universities should provide access to internet to the students who have problems with paying an internet access or those who have problems with the signal, not an internet access to all pages, like pages of videogames and movies, limit the use of the internet to the necessary websites to have classes(like zoom, Wikipedia, the different platforms of google, among others), something that is possible for every university.

As a conclusion, the access to internet should be guaranteed for the universities during this pandemic crisis for all those students who have problems with their internet connection, if the university don’t provide an access to their classes, they will be denying the legitim access to education to many of their own students, something that is against the rules of an institution that is main labor is to educate people .

  

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Please do not put the essay instructions in the "Subject" line. Put it with your answer in the message body. Subject: Please review my IELTS essay Message body: Topic: Many students believe Internet must be a free service during the Coronavirus pandemic because the department of education must guarantee the access to the school services if they continue to function.

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Please do not put the essay instructions in the "Subject" line.
Put it with your answer in the message body.

Subject: Please review my IELTS essay

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Many students believe Internet must be a free service during the Coronavirus pandemic because the department of education must guarantee the access to the school services if they continue to function.

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You have written two sentences (quite ungrammatical). The first is 188 words. That is longer than the current top-place holder of this very ignoble and dubious award.

When evaluated by https://readabilityformulas.com/free-readability-formula-tests.php, it gets the following

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