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Linat1312 Posted 6 years ago
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Many people think that it’s better for their children to study online rather than go to school. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Write a paragraph from 160 to 180 words to express your opinions.

Due to the outbreak of COVID-19, children all have to stay at home study online these days. While some people argue that learning via the internet is more advantageous than going to school, I strongly believe that face-to-face learning is much more beneficial. The chief reason is that students can focus more on their study while being taught at school. If youngsters study online at home, they will be disturbed by the noise coming from the traffic or television and can not pay attention to the lessons. Consequently, their study may be adversely affected and they may not do well in their exams. Another reason is that learning via the internet seems difficult for children to have interactions with their teachers. For example, in English lessons, it is necessary for youngsters to practice speaking English with their tutors. However, it can not be done when studying online because of several problems such as the bad network connection or the lack of time. In conclusion, I think having face-to-face learning is much better for their study than just staying at home and study through the internet.

  

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Please post essays, paragraphs, dialogues and other writing in the essay forum so a moderator does not have to move your post.

Please do not put the essay instructions in the "Subject" line.
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Subject: Please review my paragraph

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Topic: Many people think that it’s better for their children to study

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You did not follow the instructions. The word count was 160-180 and you wrote 190. When there is a specific word count, try to write between the upper and lower limits.


Due to the outbreak of COVID-19, children all have to stay at home study (wrong form) online these days. While some people argue that learning via the inte

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