Many people say that the only way to guarantee a good job is to complete a course of university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work. how far do you agree or disagree with...

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A lot of people think that it is important to finish your study at the university so as to get a good career, while others' opinion is that there is no need to join a college after school and going straight to the world of work may give you more experience. In this essay, I approve of the first idea of completing your course in the academy before taking a job.

To begin with, it is clear that colleges can provide you with an enormous ammount of knowledge which is the key material to have excellent job understanding. Thus, you can get a certant degree which is one of the requirement for having a position in the community of work espacially on these days from the university. And colleges can also offer you numerous opportunities and choices to your future career, for examples, scholarships to other countries, being recommended to big companies,...As a result, it will be much easier for you to acheive your dream job.

On the other hand, not attending university and begining to work immediately may be the fastest way to join in the society and gain experience right away but it is not the most accurate way to get the best career. Not studying in the academy can lead to lack of knowledge while working. Therefore, mistakes could be commited and bring about severe damage to your current work.

So, to conclude, possibly starting work after school may save your time and help you to partipate in the genuine community. However, this method has a lot of limitations which can lead you to be unemployed. Because of that graduating university so as to guarantee a good job is a much wiser decision.