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Solitude Posted 4 years ago
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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

In this advanced society, residents have a tendency to consume more food and drinks containing a noticeable amount of sugar which are the major culprits of numerous health issues. It is argued that the use of sugar-based products should be restricted by making it more costly. From my standpoint, although I agree with this solutions, I suppose that other measure might have an even greater impacts.
On the one hand, raising the price of sugary products could be an effective measures. This is because, when the cost of the beverages with added sugar and other sweetener is raised, people will be more likely to consume it less frequently and they have to think twice before purchasing it. In turn, the consumption of these products will be reduced, which leads to the decrease in the manufacture of these ones.
Irrespective of this, a number of feasible solutions could be adopted to mitigate this trend. The most obvious one for local as well as national authorities is to launch annual campaigns with a view to raise the public awareness about the adverse impacts of sugary drinks and encourage them to refrain from consuming these produce. In addition to this, governments should impose a restriction on the advertisement of sugar-sweetened drinks and food. Instead of this, posters and billboards which encourage inhabitants to follow a healthy eating habit should be widely spread.
In conclusion, I agree that raise the price of sugary food and drinks can be a feasible measures. Besides it, there are numerous one may be more effective.

  

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