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Lele301007 Posted 5 years ago
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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, a plethora of cuisine companies incorporate high content of carbohydrate in their products which might cause numerous health problems such as diabetes, Dyslipidemia, heart disease, obesity, etcthat might lead to death. I strongly agree to alleviate the market price of these commodities. In this essay, I will discuss further.


As we can see, sugar can be a powerful medicine if you know how to use it. It can be used as a spice to cook, providing an immediate energy,etc. on the contrary the busy life makes people tend to eat ready food because of its quickness, processed both for meals and snacks. Moreover, fast food is very cheap and delicious, it provides a large amount of calories and sugar that makes you stay energetic until the end of the day. However, according to some statistics, it shows that who consume too much sugar than allowed in a day may suffer from lots of serious health problems such as stroke, stress, cancer, depression, etc


So, making sugar more expensive is totally reasonable. on the contrary, taxing sugar just prevents people from buying it too much, it doesn’t mean that people will not stop purchasing food commodity which have high levels of sugar because they are addicted to it. Hence, it would be impossible to stop them immediately, so everyone must make an effort to change the victim’s unhealthy habit.


To sum up, high consumption of sugar added products will put the individual’s health at risk. Thus, making carbohydrate products more expensive is the best way to threat it

  

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