Many moved to the lowland cities to work for emerging heavy industry.
Is this sentence correct? Can I use only "many" instead of "many people"? Should an article be added to "industry"? Like "for the emerging heavy industry"?
The context is: During the Highland Clearances, the population decreased significantly. Many moved to the lowland cities to work for emerging heavy industry.
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Hi Eff, I don't think I've had the chance to welcome you to the forums yet, so welcome. Yes, you scan say "Many" instead of "Many people." Yes, you should have an article "the" before "emerging heavy industry."
Hi, Many moved to the lowland cities to work for emerging heavy industry.
Is this sentence correct? Yes Can I use only "many" instead of "many people"? Yes Should an article be added to "industry"? Like "for the emerging heavy industry"?No article is fine, if you want to make a very general reference like this.