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Cat blue Posted 9 years ago
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Many countries have compulsory military service for men after they leave school. It would be a good idea for all countries to adopt this system for men and possibly women. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Having the great number of male have been forced the military response to take part in after leaving school these days.Some people think that it is an excellent idea for both developed and developing countries to practice this policy to male and even female.I personally disagree with this view.
There are several reasons why implementing the military policy to young citizens is not suitable for all countries in the world.Firstly, this age is which age to the technological and modernized range are set and maintain the position.Therefore, the government should focus on the economy and politics to keep up with the constant development of wealthy countries because young people now usually spend mainly their time pursuing their dream or passion.Moreover, the use of the great amount of workforce in the military area could bring the waste of human resources of one country as this nation is peaceful. It may be more suitable when making a wide range of opportunities for youths to continue their studying way.
Secondly, the financial budget is considered as a crucial factor to rethink out about putting this system into practice to both genders.Because using the national subsidy is to raise genders in the military environment could bring unexpected subsequent drawbacks such as rape, fraud, breaking laws.In addition, if the government allows this policy and does not support other sections like politics or the economy, it could bring about the social unrest afterwards.

In conclusion, adopting the military policy to men and even women is a fruitless policy to one country because it depends on what country should have this.

  

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