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New2grammar Posted 18 years ago
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manufacturing jobs

0Manufacturing jobs in Michigan have been lost to oursourcing and that trend is still continuing amid the sluggish economy.02br
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00Please check for understandibilty. Any corrections would be appreciated.02br
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0Good, but delete "still." That's included with the idea of "continuing."0-
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0 Thanks, GG. I didn't know that. 0-
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0 ou01b00t02b00sourcing, of course. 05000 Use a comma before01i00and02i00 because you've introduced a new subject. And omit 01i00still02i00, as GG says.02br
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0HAHA. good catch!02br
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00As you may already know, I consistently make the same mistake. I don't know what is considered a new subject. 05000 . I guess it takes practice.010id6
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