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Anita_a Posted 21 years ago

Mansion Of My Dreams

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BeginPoem->A brief encounter with
The mansion of my dreams
Where all paths have gems ,
All orchards have gold.
I walked inside looking around
And left my heart behind
As a token of my existence
On the slope of Life, behold!
  

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Hello Anita I wasn't sure how the last 3 lines related to the first part – especially the slope. What do you think? MrP

— MrPedantic

  • Hello Anita I wasn't sure how the last 3 lines related to the first part – especially the slope.
  • What do you think?
  • MrP
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Hello Anita

I wasn't sure how the last 3 lines related to the first part – especially the slope. What do you think?

MrP
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hiiiiii friend:

thank you alot for your nice poem

i like it's words alot
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Thanks Randa. Appreciate your comments.

Thanks Mr.P. It's an attempt at reality and metaphor... maybe didn't work out well.
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