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New2grammar Posted 18 years ago
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man in a black vest

0How accurate is my description of the following picture02br
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00A middle-age man wearing a black vest and a wide-brimmed hat looking away from the camera with a disgusted look.02br
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0 Hi N2G02br
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00Without seeing the picture, I'd suggest these small changes:02br
01i00A middle-age01b01span00d02span00 02b00man wearing a black vest and a wide-brimmed hat01b01span00,02span
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0 I can't find the picture. Sorry for the inconveniece.02br
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00What's the difference between looking and turning away? To me, looking away is static, meaning the guy is facing in a direction not in the camera's. Turning away means the guy is moving his head away. 0-
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0 Hi N2G02br
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00I suggested the verb 'turn' ('turning') as a way to avoid repeating 'look'.02br
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0 Got it. Thanks, Yankee. 0-
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