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Zany teal 931 Posted 7 years ago
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I am writing to apply for admission to [ IBRO. ARC ] workshop, I am 20 yearOld sudanese student at Alneelain University faculty of Medical laboratory sciences definitely oxidative stress implication in neurological disorder is perfectly match with field of my interest.
I believed this workshop is ideal choice for me to do exciting reseach, give me a chance to deepen my neurological knowlege , strongly enrich and progrress myfuture studies and prospective career and be excellent opportunity to me fordeveloping my skills , experiences and abilities Acogent reason of worthiness thisworkshop opportunity is that l am really hard working ,diligent student and l look for become full fledged researcher ,created scientist ,and great Ieader who help his community, l desire to share my newly knowledge to advance Neuroscience research in my home country.
your [ lBRO. ARC ] school has an extremely good reputation in thefield of Neuroscience studies, for facilities which you offer to students seen surprising , l will be very delighted to find opportunity in this workshop because I am sure my talent will be put to optimal use, thank you for considering my request I look forward to hearing from you soon.
I believed this workshop is ideal choice for me to do exciting reseach, give me a chance to deepen my neurological knowlege , strongly enrich and progrress myfuture studies and prospective career and be excellent opportunity to me fordeveloping my skills , experiences and abilities Acogent reason of worthiness thisworkshop opportunity is that l am really hard working ,diligent student and l look for become full fledged researcher ,created scientist ,and great Ieader who help his community, l desire to share my newly knowledge to advance Neuroscience research in my home country.
your [ lBRO. ARC ] school has an extremely good reputation in thefield of Neuroscience studies, for facilities which you offer to students seen surprising , l will be very delighted to find opportunity in this workshop because I am sure my talent will be put to optimal use, thank you for considering my request I look forward to hearing from you soon.
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- I am writing to apply for admission to the [ IBRO.
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You have a lot of spelling, grammatical and punctuation errors. I have highlighted the problem areas. These make your writing unacceptable. You also omit many necessary articles - a, the or an.
I am writing to apply for admission to the [ IBRO. ARC ] workshop, I (comma splice error)
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