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Guest Posted 22 years ago

Malaysian Love Letter

I would like nothing other than to be
As the oak in front of your house
As the branch from the oak
As the leaf from the branch
As the shadow from the leaf
As the coolness from the shadow
That caresses your temple
For one second.
  

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Nice! I like how the poem leads inexorably to that longed-for caress!

  • Nice!
  • I like how the poem leads inexorably to that longed-for caress!
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4 Answers
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Nice!
I like how the poem leads inexorably to that longed-for caress!
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Hmm. Elegant like origami
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Tantalising yet innocent.
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U should post such a good poem with your name.
Its really a cool piece.

Cheers,
Anita

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