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WANG CHUN Posted 21 years ago
Grammar

Making sentences

I make two sentences , but I am not sure they are correct.
Please, help me check them.
Thank you for your help.

There is no reason to favor that universities ahould allot the money to students' sport activities as much as they give to their university's libraries.

As is known, dogs' trait of the sensitive sense of smell that would assist the police with arresting criminals.
  

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The construction is slightly awry, but the vocabulary and spelling is good. There is no reason to favor that universities should allot the same amount of money to students' sport activities as they do to their libraries. As is commonly known, it is dogs' sensitive sense of smell that assists the police with arresting criminals.

  • The construction is slightly awry, but the vocabulary and spelling is good.
  • There is no reason to favor that universities should allot the same amount of money to students' sport activities as they do to their libraries.
  • As is commonly known, it is dogs' sensitive sense of smell that assists the police with arresting criminals.
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The construction is slightly awry, but the vocabulary and spelling is good.

There is no reason to favor that universities should allot the same amount of money to students' sport activities as they do to their libraries.

As is commonly known, it is dogs' sensitive sense of smell that assists the police with arresting criminals.
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Hi **** Chun,

What are you doing with all these sentences you are making? When you revise, look for ways to get rid of unnecessary words:


There is no reason that universities should allot as much money to sports as they do to their libraries.

As is known, a dog's sensitive sense of smell can assist the police in apprehending criminals.



PS: O
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crosstalk Emotion: tongue tied

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I suggest you follow Mister Micawber's advice, he has corrected your sentences better tha
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we live in a large city

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