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This letter is intended to explain my compelling personal reasons (CPR) for the academic year 2015-2016, with the aim of having the funding received from the academic year 2014-2015 fully restored.

Does this make sense? Could it be written any better?

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AnonymousDoes this make sense?

Sort of.

AnonymousCould it be written any better?

Absolutely.

Write a very short sentence that gets directly to the point. Here are three possible interpretations:

1. You dropped out for a short time:
In this letter, I state my compelling personal reasons (CPR) for re-admission to academic studies (2015-6) with the same level of funding that I received in 2014-5.

2. You are applying for the continuation of a particular funding source:
In this letter, I state my compelling personal reasons (CPR) to continue my academic studies with the same level of funding that I received in 2014-5.

3. You were disqualified from financial aid:
In this letter, I state my compelling personal reasons (CPR) to reinstate my scholarship / student loans / grant at the same level of funding that I received in 2014-5.

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