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Snuppelina Posted 13 years ago
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make them more preferable to

Excellent amplitude resolution of XX neutron detectors compared to the YY neutron detectors make them more preferable in terms of time and energy resolution.
  

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It seems as if you are trying to say too much in one sentence or that you are repeating ideas unnecessarily. If something is 'excellent' then it's obviously 'preferable', isn't it? I'm not a physicist, so I'm not clear on the difference between amplitude resolution and time and energy resolution, but it seems that they are more or less equivalent.

  • It seems as if you are trying to say too much in one sentence or that you are repeating ideas unnecessarily.
  • If something is 'excellent' then it's obviously 'preferable', isn't it?
  • I'm not a physicist, so I'm not clear on the difference between amplitude resolution and time and energy resolution, but it seems that they are more or less equivalent.
  • Maybe one of these: The amplitude resolution of the XX neutron detectors is [better than / superior to] that of the YY neutron detectors.
  • The XX neutron detectors are [better than / superior to] the YY neutron detectors when their amplitude resolution is compared.
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It seems as if you are trying to say too much in one sentence or that you are repeating ideas unnecessarily. If something is 'excellent' then it's obviously 'preferable', isn't it?

I'm not a physicist, so I'm not clear on the difference between amplitude resolution and time and energy resolution, but it seems that they are more or less equivalent.

Maybe one of these:

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