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Hly2004 Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

make sense ?

(1)

"The delivery company can only transport the cargo to TLV,
Please reply our email to confirm whether you agree as soon as possible."

(2)

Please enter from the back door.

Do the two sentences sound natural to you, and quite easy to understand?

Thank you in advance!
  

Top answer

" The delivery company can transport the cargo to TLV only. Please reply by email whether this arrangement is acceptable as soon as possible. (2) Please enter from the back door.

  • " The delivery company can transport the cargo to TLV only.
  • Please reply by email whether this arrangement is acceptable as soon as possible.
  • (2) Please enter from the back door.
  • Please enter through the back door.
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2 Answers
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Hi Hly,
May I suggest rewriting as follows:


(1)
"The delivery company can only transport the cargo to TLV,
Please reply our email to confirm whether you agree as soon as possible."
The delivery company can transport the cargo to TLV only.
Please reply by email whether this arrangement is acceptable as soon as pos
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Thanks, that's much more better!Emotion: smile

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