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Misse Posted 12 years ago
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Make it interesting (intro)

Hi!there, could u please help me to make my introduction longer and more interesting , I'll be glad to accept any suggestions and correction.thank u!!
Who is Terry Fox? In my opinion, Terry Fox is a great hero that we should admire. Therefore, he inspired us by his determination,sympathy with others and his ambition.
  

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Misse Who is Terry Fox? You did not answer the question. Is Terry a real fox who got away from some dogs on a hunt?

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  • Misse Who is Terry Fox?
  • You did not answer the question.
  • Is Terry a real fox who got away from some dogs on a hunt?
  • Explain in one or two sentences who he is and what he did.
  • Also please use "you" and not "u" on the forums.
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MisseWho is Terry Fox?
You did not answer the question. Is Terry a real fox who got away from some dogs on a hunt?
Explain in one or two sentences who he is and what he did.

Also please use "you" and not "u" on the forums. "U" is not an English word.
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I am sorry for "u" instead of you,I did not answer the question because it is part of my introduction, my teacher told me it is better to start the thesis intro by question to attract the attention of the reader. Furthermore,Terry Fox is one of the Canadian heroes , who ran across Canada to collect money for cancer research and who had amputated right leg,also do not make fun of him because he d
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Your sentences would make a fantastic introductory paragraph. It tells who Terry is. In the body paragraphs, you tell the details, like how Terry found out he had cancer, how he reacted to the news, how he was supported by friends and family, what made him make his decision to run across Canada, his race, and the reaction of the Canadian people.

I was not insulting Terry; I was instigat
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