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Sundarnaz Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

Make it a natural sentence please

Thanks for your response to my post.

After the partition of India, many people migrated either to Pakistan or India in 1947 because of this migration many people became homeless.

Please help me make the above sentences natural.

  

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sundarnaz natural After the partition of India in 1947, many people migrated to Pakistan or to India, many of them becoming homeless in the process. Note that there are probably another four or five ways to write this. CJ

  • sundarnaz natural After the partition of India in 1947, many people migrated to Pakistan or to India, many of them becoming homeless in the process.
  • Note that there are probably another four or five ways to write this.
  • CJ
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sundarnaznatural

After the partition of India in 1947, many people migrated to Pakistan or to India, many of them becoming homeless in the process.


Note that there are probably another four or five ways to write this.

CJ

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