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Passionate_freak Posted 21 years ago

make it

Emotion: big smile

Make a friendship

Let the love survive

It will suerly dry

Tears from your eyes
  

Top answer

Mmm... The rhymes don't match very good...

  • Mmm...
  • The rhymes don't match very good...
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Mmm... The rhymes don't match very good... Emotion: smile
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Hi freak, if you don't mind I have got a point to say about your lines.

1- suerly is wrong , Im afraid, it should be thus, SURELY.

2- I leave the more experienced people to deal with the lines.

THANK YOU
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Actually I think that was just a mistake in typing down the poem... Emotion: stick out tongue
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Hello Pf

Out of interest, why do you say "let the love survive", in line 2?

MrP

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