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Contiluo Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Make an impact
Please check out the following sentences. Which is acceptable?
(1) If our society had an invisibility cloak, what impact would it bring about on society?
(2) If there were an invisibility cloak in our society, what impact would it make on our society?
(1) If our society had an invisibility cloak, what impact would it bring about on society?
(2) If there were an invisibility cloak in our society, what impact would it make on our society?
Top answer
There are too many 'society's in each sentence.
- There are too many 'society's in each sentence.
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(1) If our society had an invisibility cloak, what impact would it cause?
(2) If there were an invisibility cloak in our society, what impact would it make?
(2) If there were an invisibility cloak in our society, what impact would it make?
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(1) If our society had a cloak of invisibility (This is the standard form), what impact would it have/make?
(2) If there were a cloak of invisibility in our society, what impact would it make/have?
However, there is still oddness: just one cloak for everyone to share??
(2) If there were a cloak of invisibility in our society, what impact would it make/have?
However, there is still oddness: just one cloak for everyone to share??
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Which is natural or acceptable, (1) or (2) ?
(1) If our society had cloaks of invisibility, what impact would they have/make?
(2) If our society had a cloak of invisibility, what impact would it make?
(1) If our society had cloaks of invisibility, what impact would they have/make?
(2) If our society had a cloak of invisibility, what impact would it make?
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