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Contiluo Posted 12 years ago
Vocabulary

make an agreement

Is the wording of the following sentences natural and acceptable?

Dave discovers their singing talent and makes an agreement with them, which lets them sing the songs he writes. Then he writes them a Christmas song, which also causes an enthusiastic response.
  

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Dave discovers their singing talent and makes comes to an agreement with them, which lets them sing the songs he writes. Then he writes them a Christmas song, which also causes an enthusiastic response.

  • Dave discovers their singing talent and makes comes to an agreement with them, which lets them sing the songs he writes.
  • Then he writes them a Christmas song, which also causes an enthusiastic response.
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contiluo Is the wording of the following sentences natural and acceptable?Dave discovers their singing talent and makes comes to an agreement with them, which lets them sing the songs he writes. Then he writes them a Christmas song, which also causes an enthusiastic response.

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