You have one shot to make the difference between being married happily ever after and a guy she met and shortly dated. Don't mess up your chance with the love of your life.
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Is the first sentence natural and grammatical ? No, I cannot understand it as written. It does not make sense.
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Is the first sentence natural and grammatical ?
No, I cannot understand it as written.
It does not make sense.
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You have one shot to determine whether you will become her husband or just a guy she shortly dated. Don't mess up your chance with the love of your life.
I still feel that it could be written a little better.