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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

make a difference between

Is the first sentence natural and grammatcal?

You have one shot to make the difference between being married happily ever after and a guy she met and shortly dated. Don't mess up your chance with the love of your life.
  

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Is the first sentence natural and grammatical ? No, I cannot understand it as written. It does not make sense.

  • Is the first sentence natural and grammatical ?
  • No, I cannot understand it as written.
  • It does not make sense.
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Is the first sentence natural and grammatical? No, I cannot understand it as written. It does not make sense.
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Something like this makes more sense:

You have one shot to determine whether you will become her husband or just a guy she shortly dated. Don't mess up your chance with the love of your life.

I still feel that it could be written a little better.

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