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In the following sentence, do I have to add ' about' or ' as to' after decision? Also, if you see any grammatical mistakes can I have your comments?

The book is sent to a reader whose job is to evaluate it to make a decition about wheter or not to publish it or wheter the content of the book is acceptable.
  

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Hi, In the following sentence, do I have to add ' about' or ' as to' after decision? No. Also, if you see any grammatical mistakes can I have your comments?

  • Hi, In the following sentence, do I have to add ' about' or ' as to' after decision?
  • No.
  • Also, if you see any grammatical mistakes can I have your comments?
  • The sentence is not well structured.
  • It's too 'choppy', too 'busy'.
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Hi,

In the following sentence, do I have to add ' about' or ' as to' after decision? No.

Also, if you see any grammatical mistakes can I have your comments? The sentence is not well structured. It's too 'choppy', too 'busy'.

The book is sent to a reader whose job is to evaluate it to make a decition about wheter or not to publish it or wheter the content of th

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