Major problems in my city-single paragraph
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What are the major problems in your city? (in a face-to-face speaking exam)
Well, I live in a small city in the outskirts of Tehran and unfortunately there aren't enough facilities, firstly. Even some very basic communal facilities which make living enjoyable are not available in the city. You know, people in large cities are provided with a wide range of facilities including transport facilities, social and recreational facilities, educational facilities and a lot more, such a medical facilities. There are large up-to-date hospitals and schools and other community facilities most of which are not available where I live. In addition, public facilities existing in a large modern city also include disabled facilities and sports facilities which we are deprived of. Secondly, there aren't enough job opportunities in my hometown and I have to travel a long distance everyday to go to work in the neighboring large city.
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I noted some text that has minor or major issues. Well, I live in a small city in the outskirts of Tehran and unfortunately there aren't enough facilities, firstly . Even some very basic communal facilities which make living enjoyable are not available in the city.
- I noted some text that has minor or major issues.
- Well, I live in a small city in the outskirts of Tehran and unfortunately there aren't enough facilities, firstly .
- Even some very basic communal facilities which make living enjoyable are not available in the city.
- You know, people in large cities are provided with a wide range of facilities including transport facilities, social and recreational facilities, educational facilities and a lot more, such a medical facilities.
- There are large up-to-date hospitals and schools and other community facilities most of which are not available where I live.
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I noted some text that has minor or major issues.
Well, I live in a small city in the outskirts of Tehran and unfortunately there aren't enough facilities, firstly. Even some very basic communal facilities which make living enjoyable are not available in the city. You know, people in large cities are provided with a wide range of facili
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