Major help correcting these sentence each have 2 options?

Could you please help me with these sentences ?

1 The album has 10 songs/There are 10 songs on the album.
2 I'm among the 20 percent that win/wins.
3 Apart from that/other than that, I've never done it.
4 Me/My asking you your orgins seems personal but I need to know. (how would you say it?)
5 There are 4 people ahead of me/before me waiting to see a doctor.
6 How long do you have to wait before seeing a doctor/to see a doctor.
7 It all depends on who you're waiting to see. There are 4 doctors.
8 How many people are there before/until you're up.

9 Where did you get your x-ray (done)? I don't know where I got it (done).
10 Vaccines can't stay out in the open or else they'll go bad./can't stay out at room temperture.
11 All the players are at around 1000 points./are at about 1000 points. (how to say this)
Take your temperature putting it under arms and tighten/close are tight so as to get as precise a reading as possible. (how would you say it?)

thank you