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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Maintaining the detail of a paragraph without making more new sentences.
How can i maintain the details of this sentence and avoiding making more seprate sentences. I don't know how to explain my problem properly but how can i keep it concise?
"Having devoted a considerable amount of my spare time to studying various scientific case studies and articles on the internet, i first became interested in biology when i was handed a copy of the article "knowing Where to Scratch" as part of my summer homework during A-levels."
"Having devoted a considerable amount of my spare time to studying various scientific case studies and articles on the internet, i first became interested in biology when i was handed a copy of the article "knowing Where to Scratch" as part of my summer homework during A-levels."
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Do you mean to keep it as one sentence?
- Do you mean to keep it as one sentence?
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