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English_dude Posted 20 years ago
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mail to my new manager
Hello
I am about to join a new company and need to send an email to my new manager. I have come up with this mail, what do you guys/gals think of it
Dear pablo
I am starting on Thursday and HR informs me that i should contact you this week to get instructions on what to do on my arrival.
Do you have any specific instructions for me. IS there a good time to call you or can you mail me any instructions.
Best Regards
Juan
I am about to join a new company and need to send an email to my new manager. I have come up with this mail, what do you guys/gals think of it
Dear pablo
I am starting on Thursday and HR informs me that i should contact you this week to get instructions on what to do on my arrival.
Do you have any specific instructions for me. IS there a good time to call you or can you mail me any instructions.
Best Regards
Juan
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Dear Pablo I will be starting work with you on Thursday and HR has informed me that I should contact you this week to get instructions on what to do on my arrival. Do you have any specific instructions for me? Is there a good time to call you or can you mail me any instructions?
- Dear Pablo I will be starting work with you on Thursday and HR has informed me that I should contact you this week to get instructions on what to do on my arrival.
- Do you have any specific instructions for me?
- Is there a good time to call you or can you mail me any instructions?
- Best Regards Juan
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Dear Pablo
I will be starting work with you on Thursday and HR has informed me that I should contact you this week to get instructions on what to do on my arrival.
Do you have any specific instructions for me? Is there a good time to call you or can you mail me any instructions?
Best Regards
Juan
I will be starting work with you on Thursday and HR has informed me that I should contact you this week to get instructions on what to do on my arrival.
Do you have any specific instructions for me? Is there a good time to call you or can you mail me any instructions?
Best Regards
Juan
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thanks for the reply nona
doesn't this give the mail a degree of formality
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I will be starting work with you on Thursday"
doesn't this give the mail a degree of formality
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I will be starting work with you on Thursday"
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It does make it slightly more formal, yes, but I don't think that hurts for your contact with your new boss - unless you already know him?
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thanks for the reply
my manager interviewed me thrice, that is the extent to which i know him
what do you think i can have as the subject ?
Joining Instructions ?? or Starting on Monday
my manager interviewed me thrice, that is the extent to which i know him
what do you think i can have as the subject ?
Joining Instructions ?? or Starting on Monday
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I would still not be too informal in your email - unless it is the sort of company where everyone is lounging around in jeans, has surfboards stuck to the wall, and a booze cabinet (like one company I know).
Either title would be ok.
Either title would be ok.
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Hi,
Welcome to the Forum.
Just a very minor comment that you should be careful with capitals. You need
Dear Pablo,
I am starting on Thursday and HR informs me that I should contact you this week to get ins
Welcome to the Forum.
Just a very minor comment that you should be careful with capitals. You need
Dear Pablo,
I am starting on Thursday and HR informs me that I should contact you this week to get ins
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